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Wednesday, February 24, 2010

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A NanoAmerico^ for The American Sandwich game..

The prompt sentence this week is:
Dawn's idea of change was spending small coins, Dave wanted to emigrate.

Here's my NanoAmerico^


Sick of busking.
Dawn's idea of change was spending small coins, Dave wanted to emigrate.
And get a proper job.
24022+10 

Here's a Syllable Sestina:
BANDANA MAN
Banana fedora
Oban organ feeder
Ta Ha led Fandango.
Bora ganja-man said:
Feed your bandana man
on Hiva Oa sand.
19022+10 
More about the Syllable Sestina here

4 comments:

  1. Good Nano.
    The syllable Sestina reads welll - I'm still not sure quite how they work, and don't know if I got mine right - but I'll try some more.

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  2. Hi Stan, that's the problem with this form, you can do one that is syllabically correct, but doesn't read right, or you can make it read well but mess the syllables up. But I guess that's just experience, it's a learning curve and we're all very much beginners.

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  3. You come up with some amazing combinations in these.

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