The words this week are:
Gait, Nudge, and ripen.
Here's mine:
DREAM
I know you saw the missiles coming
but did you see the castles in the sky?
As they gait like horses at full gallop
speeding through the thinning clouds.
If you could dream, you could give my
green tomatoes a nudge to ripen.
green tomatoes a nudge to ripen.
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I absolutely love this one! It brings a plethora of thoughts and wishes to my mind. Great!
ReplyDeleteI liked the juxtaposition of this piece. And welcome back.
ReplyDeletehaha .. so much of imagery .. am still imagining the noise those castles would make ;)
ReplyDeleteHmmmm. Leaves me in quite a place of contemplation. A very good thing. Thank you for this.
ReplyDeleteMy 3ww this week.
Ha! Ha! Nicely done and i'm dreaming :)
ReplyDeleteI really like this and the first two lines could stand alone - they conjure so much!
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This so all over the place it fit me beautifully...thank you.
ReplyDeleteThank you for stopping by. I hope the poem (For the love of Pete!) made you smile. Every time we ask a child "why?" they will say "I don't know." but if you ask "what did you do first" you will get the full story!
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http://www.itcrossedmymindblog.com
Wish you a very Happy New Year, Andy. Hope to see more of you....
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